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I’m so lost
Day and Night have become a blur
My red eyes in the mirror covered by gloss
I hear voices and sounds that don’t make sense
My hands they randomly clench and tense
What time is it?
What day?
I don’t know, so lost……
Am I awake or still dreaming?
I ask myself,
Am I living or just breathing?
I fear I’ll never know the answer……..
The confusion eating at my mind like cancer,
I walk into the cavern within myself,
And raise to the penguin the question,
But his strangely childish response is merely: “Slide”
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I wrote this poem about insomnia. I guess you real insomniacs can tell me if I hit it on the mark or not. And for all you Fight Club fans I put a a little something from the movie into it. Cool points for whoever can figure it out. I figure it pretty obvious but it works for the poem so sue me! (no not really! LOL)

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